You look like you're doing okay to me.
Maybe you should do a more simple design, 3 colours with a different colour pinstripe to pick out the shapes, no fancy effects just colours, maybe a fade or 2, no stencils ? It might make things look cleaner ?
Concentrate on the shape of the design rather than the effects within it. See if that changes things ?
I like your designs because you have so much going on but at the same time I think if things are quite busy they're not as clear. It might not work at all, just a theory though, you won't know unless you try.
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