Dude,
I thought you did a cracking job.
Each commentator has they're own style. In F1 we've had; Walker, Legard, Brundle, Coulthard...etc. Each has their own style and it's grown/evolved over time. We've been so used to the RC Murray Walker (Mr Harris) that it'll take time for people to get used to your style whilst you get it nailed down.
I like it at the moment, TBH when I'm racing I very rarely here what's being said on the commentary.
For the passer by it must have made the event sound pretty cool. Hopefully the Worksop guys will book you for the Players meeting.
10/10 for effort fella. I like the way you roll.
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