None has really given me any kind of critisism on these pictures, a shame really.
The light was manufactured by me using some building lights through a huge screen made of a wood frame and old bedsheets. Take what you have.
I cant agree with you anymore on these shots, to many mistakes were made. But (i know its and excuse...but..whatev..) it was my first time really planning a shot and the light.
I didnt have a reflector at the time and just got it and i hate it that i didnt get one before the shoot.
Heres another version of one of the shots, but i dont really like it as much, the fact that her arms are cut off is way to disctracting to me.
Anyway, ill post more of these pics.